CHỮA ĐỀ THI THẬT BAND 8.0+ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 25/03/2023

ESSAY INFORMATION:

Written by: Ielts Xuân Phi, 28/03/2023

Supported by: Ex-BC Examiner, 29/03/2023

Question: Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned in the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

 (IELTS Academic – 25/03/2023)

ANSWER (8.0+):

Occasions on which private vehicles are not allowed to be driven within the central city for specific days are encouraged in some metropolitan areas. Therefore, people are stimulated to utilize public transportation. I consider its benefits such as reduced traffic congestion and a decrease in the release of carbon into the atmosphere are slightly more significant although this practice can induce inconvenience to residents.

The first benefit of banning individual means of transportation on certain days is that it can lessen traffic congestion. With fewer cars and motorbikes on the road, traffic jams can be eased and travel time for public transportation can be reduced. For instance, the annual “World Car-Free Day” that takes place on September 22nd each year encourages people to use alternative forms of transportation instead of driving their cars, leading to a significant reduction in traffic density worldwide.

Another advantage is the reduction in carbon emissions. As vehicles are a major source of air pollution, limiting or banning them on certain days can significantly lessen the levels of pollutants such as nitrogen oxides and particulate matter in the air. This can lead to improved air quality and better health outcomes, especially for people with respiratory issues.

However, as private vehicles are prohibited on certain days, it can cause inconvenience for citizens. More specifically, people who live or work in the city center may find it burdensome to have to use public transportation or walk long distances to get to their destination in lieu of utilizing their own cars or motorbikes.

In conclusion, although transport-free days may trigger inconvenience for residents, I consider its advantages including the improvement of traffic congestion and lowering of carbon footprint are far more noteworthy since it has positive impacts on the wider population. It is advisable that individuals should follow this practice to improve air quality and their own health.

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