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📌 𝑻𝑶𝑷𝑰𝑪: Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
✏ 𝑾𝑹𝑰𝑻𝑻𝑬𝑵 𝑩𝒀: Pham Tran Thuc Quyen
People’s opinions differ as to whether financial resources should be allocated to technological developments catering for space investigations. From my perspective, I firmly contend that this is not beneficially advantageous, while there are other fields in life worth spending money.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that exploring outside the earth can have favourable effects, especially in terms of mitigating the overpopulation problem. grantedly, in this contemporary world, a significant burgeoning population has been witnessed in a multitude of metropolises which potentially exceed the capacity of the earth. undoubtedly, there is a scenario visualized that humanity is likely to have no more place for living. This is a testament why money used for exploration in outer space is essential in order to find other negligible accommodations for inhabitants and thus solve the imperative issue on earth.
On the other hand, I would argue that this is not a wise choice to neglect other paramount important aspects on our plane and medical services are deemed to be prioritized. This is predicated by the assumption that there are a wealth of life-threatening diseases which presumably pose a severe threat to people’s lives. Such catastrophic health deteriorations can be alleviated by the intervention of the national budget for the improvements of amenities or some illnesses’ cures, for instance. This is particularly the case for Covid-19 since this infectious disease which exacerbates respiratory function is the main culprit of million deaths globally. by means of peculiar resources, a mass amount of vaccines are manufactured which means that many regions can achieve the herb community and thus grapple against this devastating disease.
In short, although space exploring can be slightly beneficial to solve the overpopulation, i would believe that money need to be effectively invested in medical section due to its sustainable impact on human death and live
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