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📌 𝑻𝑶𝑷𝑰𝑪: In some countries young people have become richer, healthier and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
✏ 𝑾𝑹𝑰𝑻𝑻𝑬𝑵 𝑩𝒀: Phuong Nguyen
Apparently, young people in several nations nowadays are able to lead a healthy and luxurious life. However, for them, these elements seem not to be synonymous with happiness. There are numerous reasons as well as solutions for this.
First, young adults these days are affected by various exterior factors that contribute negatively to their levels of happiness. Indeed, when social media platforms dominate their world, the young can easily be bombarded with a host of instructions to a perfect version of themselves. This, however, with a counter-effect, renders them dissatisfied with their ordinary self-image. For example, in a recent survey, most of the young girls in the United States have admitted that Instagram makes them feel insecure about their body. Besides, what results in an individual’s dissatisfaction with life is related to hectic work schedules. Evidently, the young today is required to follow a nine-to-five routine with mountains of assignments and deadlines, which spares them little time of relaxation. Consequently, they are likely to burn out and unhappiness is an inevitable aftermath.
Nevertheless, there are also practical solutions to solve this issue. The first one should be carried out by the young themselves; they must be aware of how detrimental it is to pursue an ideal but vague life existing only on social media. Thus, they must learn to restrict the amount of time spent on these platforms, then concentrate on such valuable activities as enrolling in charity organizations or playing sports. In addition, companies and co-operations need to regard their employees’ mental health as top priority. For example, the manager should divide tasks equally among the members so that an enormous amount of workload should not be put on one’s shoulders. As long as the young can strike the work-life balance, it is feasible that they can also maintain happiness.
In conclusion, although young adults may be living healthily without much financial concern, there are still elements hindering happiness in their life, some of which stem from social media and their job’s requirements. Therefore, that people should reduce time invested on the virtual world and companies manage their employees’ workload may help address this problem.
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