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📌 𝑻𝑶𝑷𝑰𝑪: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
✏ 𝑾𝑹𝑰𝑻𝑻𝑬𝑵 𝑩𝒀: Huynh Kieu Tuong Vi
Along with today’s developing society as the whole, it is a common belief that music is the priory choice for relaxing and connecting with different cultures and generations. Individually, I firmly believe that I strongly agree with this idea. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.
To begin with, a large number of advocates are inclined towards the fact that music plays an important role in human’s life. This is mainly because music brings global generations closer by its melody and depth regardless of the difference in language we speak or the age we are. As the prime example, there are more and more competitions which finding talented singers in the world like The Voice, or some clubs for people who share the same passion for music. Generally, music not only releases stress but also helps better understand the culture and region of the song.
On top of that, it is factual that human could not find the integration in music, typically, music in other nations. Specifically, the difference of language, type, instruments and others, many people unable to understand the content nor integrate into the melody of the song. From my perspective, teenagers usually listen to rap or rock, and this is not suitable for older generations loving gentle melodies like bolero. As all things mentioned above, there are various elements not only eliminate age gaps but also the generation and cultural gaps.
To conclude, no matter where we live or who we are, music would bring us together and make our lives more colourful.
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